One concern that I have about my paper is that I did not focus very much on pathos, ethos, and logos directly. Will this hurt my grade?
Another problem I have with my paper is word choice. I feel like I repeat words too often and some of my words don't feel like they are words that should be seen in a college paper.
I think you mentioned pathos directly, but I don't remember you addressing ethos or logos specifically. I don't think this will hurt your grade, but I think that mentioning them would probably help your argument. For example, you could bring up the lack of ethos and logos that hinder his argument.
ReplyDeleteI thought you had very good diction as well. In some areas, you used redundant words or your sentences were a bit wordy, but overall it seemed very professional. The only thing I would work on is making your sentences more to the point and concise.