I found that your paper flowed very well. I really enjoyed reading your paper and I'm sure that with some small revisions it will be perfect.
The first suggestion I can make in terms of flow is go back and make sure that each paragraph's content relates to it's topic sentence.  This will eliminate the feeling that your points are disconnected.  Also be sure to refer back to Blakley in every paragraph. And finally you need to make sure that you go back in and add more so that you fill the page requirments